Tuesday, January 19, 2010


Yesterday I submitted three haikus to a poetry contest. I only had one ready, but since the flat submission fee was $5 whether I submitted one, two, or three haikus, I rewrote some of my existing poems into haikus, trying to capture the poems' essence into 17 syllables. Here's an example of one I didn't send in.



The original:
Picture Day
Click
And another year is captured
Connecting you to that morning your mother lovingly dressed you in a plum jumper with a gray mouse sewn on the chest.

Bringing back
Memories of recess, research papers, and rejections
Memories of friends, Friday night dances, and your first French kiss.



As a child-
Frilly dresses, thick stockings, and Mary Janes
Striving to look as girlish as possible
(Even with buckteeth and while resembling your brother in a pearl necklace)
As a teen-
Braces flashing
Practicing your smile in the mirror
Dazzling,
Or refined,
Perhaps playful
Thrusting your fingers through your tangled hair - frustrated.
Finally satisfied - Wandering to the end of the line
Sitting up straight, ‘Oh Please don’t blink!’
And now the last Picture Day of your life
Your senior year of college- a degree almost earned
And you think on the quote you read just yesterday:
“Change is survival’s praise.”
Smile, Cheese, Click.

Here are two haikus I wrote from this poem:
Snap – moment captured
Flashes - connect you back
To who you once were.

Mary Janes spotless
Blond pigtails and frilly dress
Picture Day again




And why not a Wordle haiku?

Wordle: Picture Day


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